Hi CKirsch and welcome to Pensapedia! Thanks for expanding our content on Baptist Health Care. There are some minor technical things I'll be cleaning up behind you (not your fault; we don't have a very thorough tutorial section yet), but I wanted to clarify a few general issues:
- Please be neutral. Many of your contributions cross the line from informational to promotional.
- Use the third person voice. This follows naturally from a neutral-point-of-view. We strive to maintain an encyclopædic tone, so articles should not read like promotional copy.
- Please cite sources whenever possible, especially quotes (like the mission statement, "to provide superior service...") or facts/figures (like the Andrews Institute creating 150 new jobs and nearly $10 million in wages).