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1,326 bytes removed, 16:36, 14 March 2008
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Welcome to Pensapedia and thanks for your attempt to contribute to our project. We're glad to have you. May I ask, though, how does the [[Laura Sjoberg]] article you created relate to Pensacola? Is she a Pensacola resident or was she born here? The article does not make that clear. I would ask that you revise the article to clarify, because at current it does not meet our [[Pensapedia:About|standards for inclusion]]. If you do not take steps to clarify the article's relation to Pensacola, it will likely face deletion. Again, welcome to Pensapedia! '''[[User:Dscosson|dscosson]]''' ··· '''[[User talk:Dcosson|talk]]''' 08:00, 14 March 2008 (CDT)
:She's a Pensacola native. I think Laura was a couple years ahead of me at [[PHS]]. However, the connection to Pensacola should be stated explicitly in the article. Also, based on the username of the contributor, this article likely represents a [[Pensapedia:Conflict of interest|conflict of interest]]. I don't think we need to delete it, per se, but while I congratulate Laura on her successful career, the level of detail in the initial contribution is unnecessary and probably aggrandized.
:I've updated the article with what I believe is a reasonable compromise. Please post here if you have any objections. --[[User:Admin|Admin]] 11:26, 14 March 2008 (CDT)