Editing The Headless Maiden

The legend of '''The Headless Maiden''' of Santa Rosa Island is one that for several generations has sparked the imaginations of those who loved a good ghost story. It began in the mid-to-late eighteenth century on the once almost-barren strip of island. Florida was a territory of Spain, and English trading ships often moored there. Just south of the island lies the Gulf of Mexico, which leads to the open waters of the Caribbean Sea and Atlantic Ocean. This large body of water was well-known to be a haven for bloodthirsty pirates, who would attack merchant vessels in an effort to re-stock their own ships with food, gold, arms, and rum. One dark and stormy night, an English ship was overtaken by pirates. The captain and crew were killed, and the only two lives that were spared were those of two English girls. The pirates then sailed toward what is now known as Navarre Beach, and took the females ashore. When one of the pirates attempted to forcefully have his way with one of the girls, she refused and tried to escape -only to be subsequently tortured and beheaded with his large saber. The legend tells they buried her without her head. The exact location is unknown. Throughout the generations, many late-night fishermen have claimed to have seen her ghost wandering between the dunes, along the coastline, and in search of her head -which to this day has never been found. Some of those fishermen were so frightened by what they saw, they never returned to Santa Rosa Island at nighttime -and never went fishing there, again.
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−	The legend of '''The Headless Maiden''' of Santa Rosa Island is one that for several generations has sparked the imaginations of those who loved a good ghost story. It began in the mid-to-late eighteenth century, on the once almost-barren strip of island. Florida was a territory of Spain, and English trading ships often moored there. Just south of the island lies the Gulf of Mexico, which leads to the open waters of the Caribbean Sea and Atlantic Ocean. This large body of water was well-known to be a haven for bloodthirsty pirates, who would attack merchant vessels in an effort to re-stock their own ships with food, gold, arms, and rum. One dark and stormy night, an English ship was overtaken by pirates. The captain and crew were killed, and the only two lives that were spared were those of two English girls. The pirates then sailed toward what is now known as Navarre Beach, and took the females ashore. When one of the pirates attempted to forcefully have his way with one of the girls, she refused and tried to escape -only to be subsequently tortured and beheaded with his large saber. The legend tells they buried her without her head. The exact location is unknown. Throughout the generations, many late-night fishermen have claimed to have seen her ghost wandering between the dunes, along the coastline, and in search of her head -which to this day has never been found. Some of those fishermen were so frightened by what they saw, they never returned to Santa Rosa Island at nighttime -and never went fishing there, again.	+	The legend of '''The Headless Maiden''' of Santa Rosa Island is one that for several generations has sparked the imaginations of those who loved a good ghost story. It began in the mid-to-late eighteenth century on the once almost-barren strip of island. Florida was a territory of Spain, and English trading ships often moored there. Just south of the island lies the Gulf of Mexico, which leads to the open waters of the Caribbean Sea and Atlantic Ocean. This large body of water was well-known to be a haven for bloodthirsty pirates, who would attack merchant vessels in an effort to re-stock their own ships with food, gold, arms, and rum. One dark and stormy night, an English ship was overtaken by pirates. The captain and crew were killed, and the only two lives that were spared were those of two English girls. The pirates then sailed toward what is now known as Navarre Beach, and took the females ashore. When one of the pirates attempted to forcefully have his way with one of the girls, she refused and tried to escape -only to be subsequently tortured and beheaded with his large saber. The legend tells they buried her without her head. The exact location is unknown. Throughout the generations, many late-night fishermen have claimed to have seen her ghost wandering between the dunes, along the coastline, and in search of her head -which to this day has never been found. Some of those fishermen were so frightened by what they saw, they never returned to Santa Rosa Island at nighttime -and never went fishing there, again.